Tuesday, May 26, 2009

Week 4 Character Writing- 'The Gingerbread Man'

The Gingerbread Man is as fast as a cheetah.
He’s got brown icing lips. He has red, blue and green buttons!
By Sara

Run, run as fast as you can!
The Gingerbread Man is a very good runner. And he has red frosting lips, black eyes, and he has red, blue and green buttons.
The Gingerbread Man's job is running away from the little man and lady. He is as fast as a snowman, and a lady that is going to have a baby. Like usual people do when they have babies. He has eyes and two red buttons. He has icing like wispy clouds, a big head and he has a black nose.
By Ruby

“Can’t catch me!”
The Gingerbread man is very fast. He has red, blue and green buttons. The Gingerbread man has a black nose, and black eyes. He has a brown body and he has small arms, and long legs. The Gingerbread man looks yummy. His eyes are chocolate. The Gingerbread man has a head as round as a ball. He is quite sneaky and fast. He likes to travel. The gingerbread man doesn’t like to get eaten.
By Anouska

“Come on Come on! I am as dark as brown chocolate!"
He has small beady eyes. His nose is made with icing. He has red lips. He’s a super fast runner. He has small arms and long legs. He looks groovy and yummy to eat. He is sneaky a lot. He’s got a green button. He never wants to get eaten at all.
By Jessica

The Gingerbread Man is as big as a lunchbox. Except his face. His body is as brown as chocolate and mud. He is as fat as a ball. And his eyes and nose are black.
By Emma

Run run as fast as you can!
The Gingerbread man can beat ten hundred people. The Gingerbread Man has small arms and long legs. He has three buttons. The Gingerbread man is chocolate brown. But he can’t swim.
By Joel.P

Run run as fast as you can!
The Gingerbread man- he is as fast as a car. His lips look like icing and he is too cheeky. He’s got black eyes. He has red, blue and green buttons.
By Savannah

Run run run!
The Gingerbread man is speedy. He has black eyes and red, blue and green buttons, and red icing lips. He is a sneaky cookie. He actually can’t swim. He has small arms and long legs.
By Dimas

"Run run as fast as you can! You can’t catch me, I’m the Gingerbread man!” The Gingerbread Man has beautiful buttons. They are red, blue, and green. He has red icing lips. He is brown like chocolate. He is cool.
By Rachel

Run run as fast as you can! Catch me catch I am the Gingerbread man!
He is brown. He has black eyes. He has a black nose. He has a blue button, and a colourful button. He is chocolate. He has icing lips. He is a cookie.
By Summer

Who is running down the footpath?
It is the Gingerbread man. He has light white icing. He has colourful buttons on him. He has bright red lips. No one can catch him, and he is also very cheeky. He has a dark brown body.
By Chloe

Run run!
The Gingerbread man is as fast as a cheetah. He has three buttons. And two black eyes, and one black nose because he is made of chocolate as dark as the night!
By Madison

“I’m the Gingerbread Man!”
He had two small arms and long legs. He would be yummy to eat. The Gingerbread man looks like chocolate. The Gingerbread Man is fat like a cow. His eye’s look like chocolate. The Gingerbread Man looks like a fast runner, like a person. The Gingerbread Man looks like a cookie. The Gingerbread man can’t swim, and he has eyes and black nose.
By Martin

Run run run! “You can’t catch me because I’m the Gingerbread man!”
He smells like gingerbread. He is soft like a cow.
By Tiaan

The Gingerbread man is so fast, He is faster than a leopard. He looks so yummy. He has really red lips. The Gingerbread man has long arms and long legs. He has buttons. They are different, red and blue and green.
By Ciara

The Gingerbread man can beat 8 humans. If he came to New Zealand then I could eat him and he would be gone forever. “Ouch! Where am I?” He is as fat as a chicken. I have heard.
By Jamie

The Gingerbread man can run as fast as a plane! He has red, blue and green buttons. He has two small arms and two legs. The Gingerbread man is fat.
By Jayden

“Coming through!”
He can out run a cow. Vroom.
He is brown. He is as fast as a motor car. He is as fast as a cheetah and that is so super!
He is cool. He has blue, red and green buttons. He looks yummy. His lips are red. He is too fast for anyone. He can’t swim! He is as fat as a cow. He is made of chocolate. He has small arms and long legs. I could not beat him. He would take me out.
By Joel. W

He is all brown. The Gingerbread man is fast.
By Jordin

The Gingerbread man is soft. He’s fat as a chicken. He is so fast he does not know that he has a grin on his face. And he is sneaky! And I know the Gingerbread man from the movie of Shrek. The villan chopped the gingerbread man.
By Hayden

The Gingerbread man is faster than a fox. He is as colourful as a picture!
He is red and blue and green and brown. No one can catch up.
By Dylan

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